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This forum is for showing off completed or unfinished writing with the intent to seek advice or feedback. Before posting or responding to a thread, please read this thread.
Welcome to Writing Feedback and Critiques!
Everyone can use advice from time to time - here's the place to get it!
Starting a Thread
- Please only post stories, poetry, or other works which you have written. Do not post the work of others.
- Content must be appropriate for a PG-13 environment.
- Use the form listed to help give others an idea of what you're looking for. Feel free to add extra things!
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[b]My Opinion of This Piece:[/b]
[b]What I'd Like Help On:[/b]
[quote]PUT YOUR WRITING HERE.[/quote]
- Be polite! We are not giving opinions of how great something is, but helping the poster improve.
- Try to list at least one good thing for each negative thing you point out.
- Constructive criticism is key. Tell the poster how they can fix the problem rather than just pointing it out.
- Give examples where possible. Show them what's wrong.
- Pay attention to what the person is requesting feedback on.
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